Friday, 9 May 2014

A Mother Understands Another





A mother reclined on a chair comforting her daughter who sat at her feet sobbing uncontrollably, her head buried in her lap.
"Everyone keeps telling me that I was utterly helpless when I had to hand over the custody of my son but I can't help feeling guilty that I let him go," she managed between her sobs.
"Will he know the truth one day Mom?" she asked with hope filled in her eyes.
"Will he know that it wasn't in my hands and that I'm not the cold hearted and despicable mother like his father told him but that I love him - so much," her voice cracked at the last words.
Her mother stayed silent but a tear rolled down her face as she placed a hand on her daughter's forehead and a fresh torrent of cries emerged from her throat. 


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

9 comments:

preethi said...

Lovely...emotions well brought out in your words. :) all the best for the wow :)

Anmol Rawat said...

I loved this post :)
Well written

Swathi Shenoy said...

very beautifully written :) hope he understands her someday!

Pawan Hegde said...

Well written. Very creative too. You drew the insecurities and emotions so well. Loved it. :)

Namrata said...

Very...only a mother can understand another mother. Lovely post :)

proactiveindian.com said...

Very unusual take on the prompt, and extremely well-written!!
There are many such situations when only the person herself/himself knows the truth.

cifar shayar said...

wow take on the prompt

MOM - Master Of all Matters

Creator Of The Creators

cifar shayar said...

wow take on the prompt

MOM - Master Of all Matters

Creator Of The Creators

The Wanderer said...

Thank you so so much everyone!
Preethi, Anmol, Swathi, Pawan, Namrata, ProactiveIndian and Cifar!
This post is close to my heart. Like almost everything I write, it too has been drawn from personal experiences. And yes I hope that one day her son understands her plight and brings her happiness...
Thank you all so much once again! :)

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